fake blood blog

Does this first paragraph hook you in? Please read.?
Sweat, as the beast flees as fast as those legs allow. Blood, as the hunter drives its teeth in its flesh. Life in the balance, the Will in all its tragic glory wreaks havoc in all little harmony I see.
This is Mexico; far from the desert, near to nowhere, right at the heart of the darkest, murkiest, foulest rainforest planet Earth could ever produce.
And here I was – with a blunt knife, a nearly empty backpack and a fake map. I was lost.
What’s your opinion or overview?
If you are hooked and would like to read the rest of the chapter, here’s the link. It is also very short, so take a look.
http://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-3TmkpeQ8eqLgSkELyFGuJ9Cd?tag=thekidnapper
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yes can I have your autograph?? tehee
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